Hands-On Query Coaching
This collaborative, hands-on process blends my querying experience and industry perspective with your deep knowledge of your story. Together, we will shape your query into a clear, compelling presentation of your work.
Unlike traditional query critiques, this query coaching service allows me to ask questions in real time. Instead of pointing out issues for you to decode, we actually craft solutions.
Query Coaching Includes:
- Preliminary query critique
- One-hour virtual session to prepare your query together
- One round of feedback on your revisions
How It Works
After you check out, you will receive instructions for submitting your materials. Once I have reviewed your query, I will send your preliminary critique and a scheduling link.
We will meet over video conference to revise or write your query together.
Slots are limited.
Is Query Coaching Right for Me?
Query coaching is designed for writers who are actively preparing to submit to literary agents and want focused, strategic guidance.
It is the most effective option for developing a submission-ready query. You will learn not just what to change, but why those changes matter. Most authors finish the session with a query that is 90% ready and requires only final polishing for voice.
Over my years of offering this service, authors have consistently praised it as the best route to a strong query.
