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10-Page Critique (Limited)

$175

You have ten pages to make a reader or agent fall in love with your story. Let’s make them count.

Focused Feedback

This focused critique will give you clear, direct feedback on your opening pages.

We’ll discuss whether your first pages are doing the essential work of engaging attention, where clarity or momentum may break down, and how your opening scene can be strengthened to better capture interest and represent your story.

10-Page Critique Includes:

  • Careful read of your first 10 pages
  • One-page written critique
  • 20-minute virtual session to discuss the notes

How It Works

After you check out, you will receive instructions for submitting your materials. Once I have reviewed your pages, I will send your written critique and a scheduling link.

We will meet over phone or video conference to answer your questions and ensure you are prepared for your next steps.

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Is a 10-Page Critique Right for Me?

This 10-page critique is ideal for authors who are submitting to literary agents or publishers.

The critique will provide targeted feedback on whether your opening pages are doing their job: hooking attention, establishing clarity, and effectively setting up the story.

Author Testimonials

Average rating 4.8 out of 5 stars. Based on 18 reviews.

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  • Invaluable
    Victoria was very encouraging about my work and helped me feel confident about where my story was heading. I was very unsure of the prologue and whether I should keep it in, but she helped me see, objectively, what the story would be missing without it.

    For some, paying for a critique of your entire manuscript may not be feasible, but you also can’t rely on friends and family to give you objective advice about it either. A 10 page critique is a great middle ground, to make sure the voice sounds right and that the plot is intriguing. It is invaluable especially when coming from a professional in the industry.
  • Victoria is excellent
    I got input from Victoria that was both insightful and useful. She was professional and thorough. She got right back to me later when I asked a follow-up question. It did change my perspective and helped me to create a better book. What more can you ask for? Victoria is excellent, and you will find working with her is a worthwhile investment.
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